No no no ugh :( Peak ugly?

 Started making the changes I described and I'm embarrassed to share what it looks like:

TATHOS: Wow, shit, that's awful

TOMGOS: Not what we imagined...

TATHOS: What went wrong? It seemed a good idea...

TOMGOS: Maybe it...

TATHOS: It's too obvious, man! It's like blatant.. It's just put out there... It's fucking awful, a kid could do better

TOMGOS: Yes, it's kitsch

TATHOS: Ugh... Fuck...

TOMGOS: It's a process, Tathos, we said we would try something

TATHOS: Ugh yeah, but ugh... Shit, I can't look at it

TOMGOS: Get a grip! All our stuff goes through 'peak ugly', doesn't it?

TATHOS: Yeah... I guess... What do we do? Maybe just delete it. Yeah, it's start over.

TOMGOS: We said we would follow a process, and we will! We won't learn if we quit

TATHOS: Ugh, I guess... Ok, so what's the process?

TOMGOS: We discussed it several times now - do you not remember? Have you been smoking weed again? We will try to let you lead with ideas, and I will consider them and add meaning, steer things... I'll try to make everything just a symbol, so you need to help make it more random

TATHOS: You know we don't smoke since the whelk thing in Amsterdam... Ok, so you want me to go with what I think?

TOMGOS: Yes, you don't have any issues about being random normally! And don't mention the whelk thing

TATHOS: Well maybe don't mention weed. And I am not random... My ideas make sense, I'm just not sure why I say them...

TOMGOS: Ok, ok, and I can help with that... Calm down old friend, this is ok

TATHOS: We need to loose the body

TOMGOS (laughing): Hide the body man!

TATHOS (laughing): Yeah, bury that fucker... It's too obvious, it's ikk. So I guess when I imagined this, I imagined it on a bridge... Like the bridge at Charing Cross actually...

TOMGOS: Why?

TATHOS: I don't fucking know!

TOMGOS: Ok, sorry, a bridge... Weird... but that could work... It reminds you of work?

TATHOS: I guess so, yeah... And bridges are dangerous...

TOMGOS: Not very, but ok, I guess... And they represent transition...

TATHOS: Oh... yeah... I guess so... Wow...

TOMGOS: The guy behind could be dropping his phone over the side!

TATHOS: The arse fucker?

TOMGOS: Ugh, you know we regret that post... People will think we were drunk... And it probably offended a bunch of people

TATHOS: I don't give a shit... Besides, do you seriously think anyone reads this?

TOMGOS: Good point... Ok, I think this could work - see, the process... trust the process... The dropped phone will make it easier to see it's a collision... I think we try that then chat more

TATHOS: Good stuff... I'm off for a spliff

TOMGOS: What the actual fuck?

TATHOS: Chill dude, can't you tell when I'm fucking with you

TOMGOS: Humph... Ok, let's do this!